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Writing short passages

  In this age of social media and Twitter, it is not surprising that people’s attention span is much shorter than it used to be. Twitter allows you to communicate with only 140 characters. This has flowed over into other applications also. While you can communicate in that length, it doesn’t give you much time to develop a story. Although I do remember hearing about someone who wrote a novel via Twitter, 140 characters at a time. That would take quite a bit of time to accomplish, let alone dedication. But the truth f the matter is, people would absorb the information in those bite sized chunks.

 
  What does this mean for us as authors? It means that we need to learn to write in short passages. We may not need to stick to writing everything in 140 characters at a time but, we do need to keep it shorter than we may be used to and be more concise. If you have a huge chapter with long explanations where nothing seems to be moving along, you will lose the attention of your reader.

  Short chapters are better than long chapters. That goes for the paragraphs and sentences too. It simply keeps the story moving. This holds true whether your work is fiction, non-fiction or a blog post. Shorter sections are just easier to read and can be digested quickly. If that is the case for your writing, then others will be more willing to comment on it and share or recommend it.

  
  Writing concise can be a challenge and not everyone can do it well. It takes some people 5 pages just to say ‘the sun rose’. Sometimes it is just a matter of going back to basic English, mention the subject, the verb and the direct object. In other words, get your main point across and only that, leave out a lot of the description and narration that fills up so much dead space. There can be a place for some of that, but not all of it. Just keep it short and to the point. Don’t drone on, people will quit listening.

  

What are your recommendations for writing concisely?

Forward momentum

  Forward momentum, you won’t accomplish anything without it. So many people complain about not getting anywhere or nothing ever working in their favor yet, they are never doing anything about it to make the change they want. There is a sense of expectation among people, they tend to think that if the simply want something, that it will be given to them, then they wonder what’s wrong when nothing happens.
  
  What is wrong, is that thinking about doing something is not doing it. It is only thinking about it, there is no momentum at all. Now, don’t get me wrong, I am not saying that there isn’t any value in meditation, because there is a great amount of benefit from it. But there is a difference between meditation and just thinking or wishing about something. If all you do is just think that you’d like to become something, then that is nothing more than a dream. That’s all it will be if you don’t act on it.
  
  You only make progress if you are moving forward or taking relevant action. Notice that key phrase in there, Relevant Action. You can say you are making progress because you are moving forward but, if that action is not directed towards your goal, then it is wasted action. Sometimes when you are taking relative action, you don’t move forward. That is because with any progress, there will be set backs. These set backs define you and your plan. Although these set backs make it look like you are not moving forward, they are refining your goal and moving you further ahead.
  
  So what can you do to maintain forward momentum? It’s just like running, you simply put one foot in front of the other and keep moving forward. But there are a few steps you can use to move forward.
  Know what you want. Be specific. Set a goal
  Create a plan. How are you going to get it?
  Work your plan. Practice as much as you can. Put in as much effort as you can.
  Refine your plan as you go. Think about it and rework it.
  Don’t give up. There will be set backs, push through them.
  Create your next goal. Repeat the process.

  What steps do you take to create forward momentum?